11 Second Club Critique Essay

Chicken or egg?
It's August! You could be heading for the beach to relax or, like many of our dedicated animators here at Animation Apprentice, you could be polishing your animation skills by entering The 11 Second Clubthe monthly character competition in which aspiring animators compete to win prizes and get their work noticed.

Animators from all over the world participate, animating a character speaking a line of dialogue, which is provided on the first day of every month by the club. This month our students will tackle a question of philosophy: which came first, chicken or egg?

What is the 11 Second Club?
It's a monthly free animation competition. Participating animators can share their progress with one another and critique each other's work - just like in a real animation studio.

At the end of the month, all the participants vote for the submission that they consider the best for that month.  The idea of the 11 Second Club is "to give animators a chance to practice their skills in a fun, challenging environment".

What is the dialogue for this month?
This month's competition is, as ever, an eleven second piece of dialogue. It is taken from the TV show Gallivant.


Woman: "Is this for real? Is this really happening?
Man: "I got this. I think what we need to consider here is what came first. We have a chicken, and there was an egg. But before that, there was another chicken".
Woman: "Kill the Chicken I'll eat it for dinner. NEXT!".

How should an animator approach a shot like this?  
A good animator tries to imagine the scene in their head before starting out. What is the scene about? What is happening?  Try to think of a funny and original take on the line - and see it play as a movie in your imagination. Also, decide if you want to animate both characters, or just one. Remember, one could be off camera, which will save you a ton of work.

Start by writing out the line of dialogue yourself on a piece of paper. Mark the big accents in the line. Where is the emphasis, where are the big transitions? Below is a line of dialogue I animated on the movie "Robots". You can see I have underlined the words which are heavily accented. This is where the big transitions will be.


Download the line of dialogue and drag it into your Maya scene file. Now you can see roughly the timing of where your big transitions will be (to see more about using sound in maya, read this post).

Your Maya timeline will also show you where the big changes are in the waveform - these are your big accents, roughly where your poses will go. In the example below, the biggest accents in the line are at around frame 27 and frame 63.

waveform in Maya. Where are the accents?

Act the scene out yourself and film yourself doing it on your phone - or get someone else to film you. Don't worry about not being the greatest actor ever. You just want to get some ideas for the key poses in your shot.




Once you have some ideas, and you have shot some footage, do thumbnail sketches, based on the key poses in your performance. If you're feeling stuck, you can import the footage into your shot and use an image plane to help create your key poses. Watch the video above for some tips on thumb nailing by master animator Glen Keane.

The trick is to break down the dialogue into smaller components, or phrases. In this line, there are around eight main parts or phrases to the line.
  1. Is this for real? 
  2. Is this really happening? 
  3. I got this. 
  4. I think what we need to consider here is what came first. 
  5. We have a chicken, and there was an egg. 
  6. But before that, there was another chicken.  
  7. Kill the Chicken - I'll eat it for dinner. 
  8. NEXT!.
When you do your thumbnails, do a separate sketch to correspond to each phrase in the line.  There is a lot of complexity in this line - there is a lot going through her head. Each thought can have its own corresponding expression or pose.

Thumbnail each emotion and you should get some nice poses, which you can then use as the key poses in your animation.

Once you have done your preparation, and you know exactly what you plan to do, execute the plan. Create character poses in Maya on stepped curves, and get the blocking of the shot right. Don't deviate from your plan - stick to the thumbnails. You can change it later if it doesn't work.

Once you have a pose test in stepped curves, get feedback from animators whose opinion you respect, tweak it, and, once you are happy, use the TweenMachine free Maya tool to help break down your poses.

Finally, when everything is working, spline your curves and refine the final result. Remember to leave the lipsync to the end - this is the least important part of a good acting shot.

To see more about how the Eleven Second Club works, read this blog post. And to see more about how to use thumbnail sketches to create great animation, watch this short video.

And good luck! Entering competitions is a great way to raise your game as an animator. To find out more about this month's competition, follow this link. And to see the winner of the October 11 Second Club, which was an action piece to the sound of Star Wars light sabres, click here.

Below is a good example of the high quality of work exhibited at the Competition - the winner in February 2015. It's well animated - and also stylish and inventive.




---Alex

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Gotta Make em Laugh!
This is to officially announce the start of the first 24 hour challenge(hosted by us)!

This challenges theme is "Gotta Make em Laugh"

I'm sure most of us will agree one of the main attractions to animation is it's ability to make us laugh. So this challenge is all about laughing.

They say laughter is contagious so the best way to make someone laugh is to laugh yourself. So without further ado, let's all get laughing.

Here's how to enter this 24 hour challenge.


-Download one or all of the audio files below.

-Choose your favorite one.

-Log into Skype. (If you haven't been contacted by Steve or myself on your skype. Please message me at cosmicfool_animator and I will add you to the Skype chat room a.s.a.p.)

-Start animating.

You will have till the end of the next day to submit your finished piece.

Failure to deliver it on time will result in it not being shown with all of the finished entries.

We recommend that you keep your shot size to the number of frames contained in the audio file or less. 2-4 seconds is optimal. I know the time limit is short, but it is encouraged to plan your shot out as best as you can before you start animating. Take some time, shoot some reference, draw some thumbnails, whatever it is you do to prepare before you animate do. Get some feedback on it from your friends on Skype. Now stop reading this post and start animating!

If you are unfamiliar with uploading to dropbox, please find a tutorial here


Here are the sound files. Good luck to everyone!

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